Do you think public transportation will become more popular in the future? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think public transportation will become more popular in the future for a few reasons.
First of all, it helps to reduce gas emissions, so it has a positive effect on environment.
Second, it can be a great solution for traffic jams.
Many commuters get stressed when they go to company nowadays because of serious traffic jams.
They are able to relieve stress if the traffic jams are solved by using public transportation.
Therefore, public transporation will get more popular because they have many advantages.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Excellent job explaining why public transportation is important! I like how you included environmental and personal benefits. Just watch small details like spelling (transporation → transportation) and pronouns (they → it for public transportation). Keep up the good work — your ideas are very clear and organized!
~Teacher Polly
I think public transportation will become more popular in the future for a few reasons.
>>CORRECT
First of all, it helps to reduce gas emissions, so it has a positive effect on environment.
>>First of all, it helps reduce gas emissions, which has a positive effect on the environment.
Second, it can be a great solution for traffic jams.
>>CORRECT
Many commuters get stressed when they go to company nowadays because of serious traffic jams.
>>Many commuters feel stressed when going to work nowadays because of serious traffic congestion.
They are able to relieve stress if the traffic jams are solved by using public transportation.
>>They can relieve stress if traffic jams are reduced by using public transportation.
Therefore, public transporation will get more popular because they have many advantages.
>>Therefore, public transportation will become more popular because it has many advantages.
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