Do you think reading comic strip is good for kids? Why?

2025-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I think the reading comic strips is good for kids is bad because I think comic strip better for studying more story book. But, Iam always reading a comic strips.

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                                             Do you think reading comic strips is good for kids? Why?


I think the reading comic strips is good for kids is bad because I think comic strip better for studying more story book.
>> I think reading comic strips is bad because I believe they should study or read more storybooks or textbooks. 

But, I am always reading a comic strips.
>> But I always read comic strips. 

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