Do you think reading the newspaper should read the news?
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There are news, advertisements, etc in newspaper, I think the most important part is news.
So I think reading newspaper should read the news.
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Do you think children should read the news in the newspaper?
There are news, advertisements, etc in newspaper, I think the most important part is news.
>> There are news, advertisements, etc. in newspapers, and I think the most important part is the news.
So I think reading newspaper should read the news.
>> So I think children should read newspapers, especially the news.
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