Do you think relationships at work should be banned? Explain your side.
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I think relationships have nothing to do with work. So, it shouldn\'t be banned.
Because it is their privacy, a company shouldn\'t interfere employee\'s relationship.
They don\'t have right to ban relationships at work.
But, employees have not to affect their work, not to damage their coworkers.
If they do that, the relationships at work aren\'t problem.
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I think relationships have nothing to do with work. So, it shouldn\'t be banned. Because it is their privacy, a company shouldn\'t interfere employee\'s relationship.
>>I think relationships have nothing to do with work. So, it shouldn\'t be banned. Because it is their privacy, a company shouldn\'t interfere with employee\'s relationship.
They don\'t have right to ban relationships at work. But, employees have not to affect their work, not to damage their coworkers.
>>They don\'t have a right to ban relationships at work. But, employees work shouldn\'t be affected so as not to damage their coworkers.
If they do that, the relationships at work aren\'t problem.
>>If they do that, the relationships at work aren\'t problematic.
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