Do you think robots will replace humans in the future?
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In the medical world, there are robots that replace humans.
I\'ve been using robot cleaners for a long time, and I\'m also taking my place.
I think robots will replace humans in the future.
Humans are old and sick and die.
Robots made by humans have no death.
so the future world.
There are also science fiction films where robots dominate humans.
As civilization develops, some are convenient, but others are lost.
Humanity is lost.
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>>CORRECT!
I\'ve been using robot cleaners for a long time, and I\'m also taking my place.
I\'ve been using robot cleaners for a long time, and I\'m also taking my place.
>>I\'ve been using robot cleaners for a long time and it\'s also taking my place.
I think robots will replace humans in the future.
I think robots will replace humans in the future.
>>CORRECT!
Humans are old and sick and die.
Humans are old and sick and die.
>>Humans grow old, get sick and would eventually die.
Robots made by humans have no death.
Robots made by humans have no death.
>>Robots made by humans do not die.
so the future world. There are also science fiction films where robots dominate humans.
so the future world. There are also science fiction films where robots dominate humans.
>>They will remain until the the future of this world. There are also science fiction films where robots dominate humans.
As civilization develops, some are convenient, but others are lost.
As civilization develops, some are convenient, but others are lost.
>>As civilization develops, some things become convenient and other things are lost.
Humanity is lost.
Humanity is lost.
>>CORRECT!
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