Do you think sending your loved ones to nursing homes is a kind of abandonment?
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Do you think sending your loved ones to nursing homes is a kind of abandonment?
No. Because my loved ones may not be usefull to me, but They can be usefull to others. And If I throw them away, they will be trashes. So sending my loved ones to other people is not a abandonment.
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No.
>> No, I don\'t.
Because my loved ones may not be usefull to me, but
They can be usefull to others.
>> It\'s because my loved ones may not be useful to me but they can be useful to others.
And If I throw them away, they will be trashes.
>> Also, if I put them away, they will be trashed.
So sending my loved ones to other people is not a abandonment.
>> So, sending my loved ones to nursing homes isn\'t abandonment.
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