Do you think simeple greetings can change someone\'s day?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think a simple greeting can change someone\'s day. Even though whatever greeting is, the power that the greeting has is big. If I encounter someone who I haven\'t seen because we couldn\'t have the enough time to take the time to see and he\'ll say \"oh long time no see\" or \"hi it\'s been a while\" you to me. It\'s just a very simple and ordinary greeting. But it might act complexly the feelings like delight to see you after so long, lucky to see you in the middle of the road. I sometimes have that experience especially when I walk the way to go to college. The day it happened to me, mostly I spent a nice day. So I try to say something even simple greetings to someone who Im not close to.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sunny!I think so, too. I believe even a simple greeting can brighten someone’s day. It can make a person feel noticed and happy. Friendly words can make a stressful or ordinary day feel better. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.^^ See you in class!
~T. Jewel
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I think a simple greeting can change someone\'s day.
>>CORRECT
Even though whatever greeting is, the power that the greeting has is big.
>>No matter what the greeting is, it has great power.
If I encounter someone who I haven\'t seen because we couldn\'t have the enough time to take the time to see and he\'ll say \"oh long time no see\" or \"hi it\'s been a while\" you to me.
>>If I run into someone I haven’t seen because we never had the chance to meet, and they say to me, ‘Oh, long time no see’ or ‘Hi, it’s been a while’.
It\'s just a very simple and ordinary greeting.
>>CORRECT
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>>It’s just a simple, ordinary greeting.
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>>It’s just a simple, ordinary greeting.
But it might act complexly the feelings like delight to see you after so long, lucky to see you in the middle of the road.
>>But it might bring up complex feelings, like the joy of seeing someone after a long time, or the surprise of running into them in the middle of the street.
I sometimes have that experience especially when I walk the way to go to college.
>>I sometimes had that experience, especially when I walked the way to college.
The day it happened to me, mostly I spent a nice day.
>>On the day it happened, I mostly had a nice day.
So I try to say something even simple greetings to someone who Im not close to.
>>So I try to say something, even just a simple greeting, even to someone I’m not close to.
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