Do you think sites like Facebook are good for friendships or do they stop people from becoming close

2016-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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For the most part, the positive aspects of social networking still far outweighs the negative. The powerful ability to connect with personal and business contacts from around the globe can drastically increase your effectiveness in business, academia and in education. It lets you make connections with other people easily. You can use social networking sites to stay up to speed with what your friends are doing. If the social network is popular, you may be able to track down old friends and acquaintances and renew long-forgotten friendships. Online social interactions with social networking have not only been starting new relationships, but ending many others. It is very simple to communicate and share pictures or plans with a person on social media and keep it completely under wraps. This new temptation has been driving wedges into people’s real life, offline relationships, often time ending them for good. Social networking puts trust to the limit. So moderation is extremely important.

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Good day to you Sir [이름]! Happy Tuesday. ^.^ It is the start of the holiday. ^^ Yahoo! I hope that you will have a great time with your family and relatives. Social networking site is important nowadays. It is a chance for people to communciate with their love ones often. It is also good to see pictures of your friends who create good memories with other people. Thank you so much for your insights. See you. Teacher Nina   For the most part, the positive aspects of social networking still far outweighs the negative. >> Did you mean: For most parts, positive aspects of social networking still far outweighs the negative. The powerful ability to connect with personal and business contacts from around the globe can drastically increase your effectiveness in business, academia and in education. >> correct It lets you make connections with other people easily. >> correct You can use social networking sites to stay up to speed with what your friends are doing. >> correct If the social network is popular, you may be able to track down old friends and acquaintances and renew long-forgotten friendships. >> correct Online social interactions with social networking have not only been starting new relationships, but ending many others. >> correct It is very simple to communicate and share pictures or plans with a person on social media and keep it completely under wraps. >> correct This new temptation has been driving wedges into people’s real life, offline relationships, often time ending them for good. >> correct Social networking puts trust to the limit. >> correct So moderation is extremely important. >> correct

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