Do you think society needs faith? Is it beneficial or harmful?

Regardless of whether it is religious faith or not, faith is extremely important in our lives and in many cases. Different people put their faith on different things. However, most of us have faith in common things and this is one of the aspects that identify us as human beings. From when we are born into the world, this is where faith begins. We go through life hoping that the future will hold all we desire. If we did not have faith, we would not sacrifice for the future and this is the essence of faith. We depend on faith for every day. Talking about religious faith, religion is seen as the gateway to supernatural power that hold answers that are above us; having faith in God. Life is filled with great pain, joys and things we cannot simply understand. For this reason, we cannot rule out God completely irrespective of the religion we hail from. We all need faith and whether we realize it or not, we are wired to respond to faith.However, let's be careful not to be over-religious.

Thanks for your composition Sir [이름]! I totally agree with your opinions. Faith is really important. We should also respect other religions. I like how you expressed your opininions in writing. It\'s wonderful! I love your ideas, keep on sharing it in class. Teacher Nina   Regardless of whether it is religious faith or not, faith is extremely important in our lives and in many cases. >> Correct Different people put their faith on different things. >> Correct However, most of us have faith in common things and this is one of the aspects that identify us as human beings. >> Correct From when we are born into the world, this is where faith begins. >> From the time when we were born into the world, this is where faith begins. >> OR: Faith begins as soon as we are born. We go through life hoping that the future will hold all we desire. >> Correct If we did not have faith, we would not sacrifice for the future and this is the essence of faith. >> Correct We depend on faith for every day. >> We depend on faith everyday. Talking about religious faith, religion is seen as the gateway to supernatural power that hold answers that are above us; having faith in God. >> Correct Life is filled with great pain, joys and things we cannot simply understand. >> Correct For this reason, we cannot rule out God completely irrespective of the religion we hail from. >> Correct We all need faith and whether we realize it or not, we are wired to respond to faith. >> Correct However, let\'s be careful not to be over-religious. >> Correct