Do you think soldiers and police officers are heroes? Why do you think so?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes! I think soldiers and police officers are heroes.
It\'s because soldiers and police officers are protecting us.
I don\'t even want to dream of our country having no police or soldiers.
I like soldiers and police officers.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sunny!
Thank you for giving your opinion for today.
I agree with what you said.
You expressed your thoughts beautifully.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Yes! I think soldiers and police officers are heroes.
>> Correct
It\'s because soldiers and police officers are protecting us.
It\'s because soldiers and police officers are protecting us.
>> Correct
I don\'t even want to dream of our country having no police or soldiers.
I don\'t even want to dream of our country having no police or soldiers.
>> I don\'t even want to dream of our country with no police or soldiers.
I like soldiers and police officers.
I like soldiers and police officers.
>> Correct
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