Do you think some people know that they will fall in love with someone the first time they meet?

2014-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Looking at the couples around us, it is not uncommon to see that they fell in love the first time they met. It is called love at first sight, and it can happen all the time, however I am a person who still believes that the relationship should be built over times. Love at first sight could not be real. You like what you see. That's the physical appearance. You might have special feelings toward him/her without talking a lot each other. However, as time passes by, you will get to know the person’s real personality and shortcomings, then the first feelings you had could change. That’s why people usually fall in love over time. You can have a very strong connection with someone at first, but for true love you have to know a person. Especially when you are young, you are more likely to be physically attracted to the person and often miss danger signs in their personality. The reverse is usually true as you get older. We all have ghosts in our closets. It's a good idea to take it slow.

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A great day and compostion! I definitely agree with you Sir [이름]. I was able to realize that we should take things slowly. We shouldn\'t rush especially in knowing a person. There are some relationships that they\'ve been together for a long time, but they knew that their partner is lying to him/ her through the years. It is really difficult to know a person these days. Communication should always be there and understanding. I really want to hear more of your ideas. I am learning from you from this topic. HIhihi. Take Care! Teacher Nina   Looking at the couples around us, it is not uncommon to see that they fell in love the first time they met. >> Correct It is called love at first sight, and it can happen all the time, however I am a person who still believes that the relationship should be built over times. >> Correct Love at first sight could not be real. >> Correct You like what you see. >> Correct >> OR: You admire what you see/ That\'s the physical appearance. >> Correct You might have special feelings toward him/her without talking a lot each other. >> You might have special feelings toward him/ her without sharing a lot of things to each other. >> OR: You might have a special feeling towards him/ her without having several conversations to know each other. However, as time passes by, you will get to know the person’s real personality and shortcomings, then the first feelings you had could change. >> Correct That’s why people usually fall in love over time. >> Correct You can have a very strong connection with someone at first, but for true love you have to know a person. >> Correct Especially when you are young, you are more likely to be physically attracted to the person and often miss danger signs in their personality. >> Correct The reverse is usually true as you get older. >> Correct We all have ghosts in our closets. >> Correct It\'s a good idea to take it slow. >> Correct

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