Do you think South Koreans should be encouraged to stop using Korean age? Why? Why not?
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Do you think South Koreans should be encouraged to stop using Korean age? Why? Why not?
=>I don\'t think South Koreans should encourage to stop using Korean age. Because it could be considered as one of culture, and living in Korea , we don\'t think it make us uncomfortable, and make harm to the people.
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QUESTION: Do you think South Koreans should be encouraged to stop using Korean age? Why? Why not?
I don\'t think South Koreans should encourage to stop using Korean age.
>>I don\'t think South Koreans should be encouraged to stop using Korean age.
Because it could be considered as one of culture, and living in Korea , we don\'t think it make us uncomfortable, and make harm to the people.
>>It\'s because it is considered as part of our culture in Korea and I don\'t think it makes us uncomfortable or do harm to people.
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