Do you think stars have masical power?
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You said the sun have a magical power! But I know sun has two powers that can make plants grow up and make radioactivity. Stars could help humanbeings but I don\'t believe they have particular magic power.
I can\'t figure out why people think stars have magical power.
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T. DON
You said the sun have a magical power! But I know sun has two powers
that can make plants grow up and make radioactivity. Stars could help
humanbeings but I don\'t believe they have particular magic power.
I can\'t figure out why people think stars have magical power.
I can\'t figure out why people think stars have magical power.
>> You said the sun has a magical power! But I know the sun has two powers, it can make plants grow and it make radioactivity. Stars could help
human beings but I don\'t believe they have a particular magic power.
I can\'t figure out why people think stars have magical powers.
I can\'t figure out why people think stars have magical powers.
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