Do you think stem cell research will be a normal and accepted part of medicine in the future?
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Yes, stem cell is really helpful.
But it is costly.
So it means that only rich people can afford it.
Maybe they should lower down the price of it. ^^
Do you think people who receive this kind of therapy will have a longer life?
We can discuss it in class.
Teacher Nina
Stem cells offer much hope for medical advancement because of their ability to grow into almost any kind of cell.
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For instance, neural cells in the brain and spinal cord that have been damaged can be replaced by stem cells.
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In the treatment of cancer, cells destroyed by radiation or chemotherapy can be replaced with new healthy stem.
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>> OR: In the treatment of cancer, cells destroyed by radiation or chemotherapy can be replaced with a new one.
Dead cells of almost any kind, no matter the type of injury or disease, can be replaced with new healthy cells thanks to the amazing flexibility of stem cells.
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There are three main sources for obtaining stem cells - adult cells, cord cells, and embryonic cells.
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There is a controversy over getting the embryonic cells.
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Those who value human life from the point of conception, oppose embryonic stem cell research because the extraction of stem cells from this type of an embryo requires its destruction.
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In other words, it requires that a human life be killed.
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Some believe this to be the same as murder.
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Despite all the controversies, the stem cell research ~
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