Do you think stress is ever good, useful, or necessary?
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I think, people are all needed stress. The proper stress give us energy and chances which grow up. However too much stress is not good. Each person has different amount of stress what they needed. For example, When I’m doing the work I have tendency to like stressful situation. Therefore I choose the anesthesia. When I’m taken the emergency situation, Adrenaline is pumped out and I become to use my brain full. I like this feeling very much.
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Hello Saki-San! :)
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I think, people are all needed stress.
>> I think, all people need stress. Good stress.
The proper stress give us energy and chances which grow up.
>> The good stress gives us energy and chances to grow up.
However too much stress is not good.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> However, too much stress is not good.
Each person has different amount of stress what they needed.
>> Each person has different amount of stress that they needed.
For example, When I’m doing the work I have tendency to like stressful situation.
>> For example, When I’m doing my work I have a tendency to like stressful situation.
Therefore I choose the anesthesia.
>> That\'s why, I chose to be an Anesthesiologist.
When I’m taken the emergency situation, Adrenaline is pumped out and I become to use my brain full.
>> When I’m in an emergency situation, I usually have the adrenaline rush and I tend to use my brain fully.
I like this feeling very much.
>> CORRECT!
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