Do you think stress is ever good, useful, or necessary? Why or why not?

2020-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

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Stress has both positive and negative effects. If Someone is being lazy, stress need to do for her/him as a awakening effect. On the other way, someone feels stress, the condition is not good and feel sad, lonely or depressed. So stress is sometimes useful but normally not good.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [이름]! Thanks for sending in your composition. I appreciate your thoughts on this, and I do agree that stress has some advantages but generally viewed as a negative concept.

Anyway, let\'s talk more in class. See you! ^^

~T.Avery

Stress has both positive and negative effects.

>> CORRECT

If Someone is being lazy, stress need to do for her/him as a awakening effect.

>> If someone is being lazy, stress is needed to create for him/her an awakening effect.

OR>> If someone is being lazy, stress is necessary to awaken him/her.

On the other way, someone feels stress, the condition is not good and feel sad, lonely or depressed.

>> On the other hand, if someone feels stressed, the condition is not good and may make him/her feel sad, lonely, or depressed.

So stress is sometimes useful but normally not good.

>> Therefore, stress is sometimes useful but is normally not good.

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