Do you think stress is ever good, useful, or necessary? Why or why not?.
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I don\'t think stress is ever good because I have seen a lot of articles about stress.
>> CORRECT
Many experts. say that stress is one of the main cause of various disease.
>> Many experts say that stress is one of the main causes of various diseases.
I fully agree with experts because I have been sick due to severe stress.
>> CORRECT
However, many professionals issued their study that some amount of stress are good to push just to level of optimal alertness, behavioral and cognitive performance.
>> However, many professionals issued their study that some amount of stress are good just to push a person to a certain level of optimal alertness, behavioral and cognitive performance.
Stress can strengthen the immune system and protect against some disease.
>> Stress can strengthen the immune system and protect the body against some diseases.
I have read the article about this issue, and then was surprised because moderate levels of stress before surgery help preventing breast cancer because it suppress the production of estrogen.
>> I have read the article about this issue, and then was surprised because moderate levels of stress before surgery can help prevent breast cancer because it suppresses the production of estrogen.
I thought stress is just thing we need to get rid of but I learnt that moderate stress can help keep people\'s health.
>> I thought stress is something we need to get rid of but I learnt that moderate stress can help keep people\'s health.
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