Do you think students should bring a lunchbox to school? Why?
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I think students shouldn\'t bring a lunchbox to school because there is a school meal.
School meal is delicious and nutritious.
I was bring a lunchbox to school 1 or 2 times because I had a enteritis.
So I had to eat porridge.
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Jean~~
Do you think students should bring a lunchbox to school? Why?
I think students shouldn\'t bring a lunchbox to school because there is a school meal.
>> OR: I believe that bringing a lunchbox to school isn\'t needed because there is a school meal.
School meal is delicious and nutritious.
>> School meals are delicious and nutritious.
I was bring a lunchbox to school 1 or 2 times because I had a enteritis.
>> I brought a lunchbox to school 1 or 2 times because I had enteritis.
So I had to eat porridge.
>> CORRECT~~
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