\"Do you think talent is something you are born with or is it something you can learn and adapt as y
학생이 쓴 원문
\"Do you think talent is something you are born with or is it something you can learn and adapt as you grow older?\"
My favorite singer NCT’s member Jung-woo, he hasn’t talent in dancing. But he 15 years old, he watched a movie. The movie is “Step up”, and He decided learning to dance. also, He enrolled at dance academy. And then, He practice very hard. So, his dance skill was getting better than before. After, he attended audition, and he passed the contest. Finally, he debuted as NCT’s member. Likewise, I think the talent can learn and adapt grow older.
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My favorite singer NCT’s member Jung-woo, he hasn’t talent in dancing.
>>> My favorite singer NCT’s member, Jung-woo, didn\'t have a talent in dancing.
But he 15 years old, he watched a movie.
>>> But when he was 15 years old, he watched a movie.
The movie is “Step up”, and he decided learning to dance.
>>> correct
Also, He enrolled at dance academy.
>>> Also, he enrolled at a dance academy.
And then, He practice very hard.
>>> And then, he practiced very hard.
So, his dance skill was getting better than before.
>>> correct
After, he attended audition, and he passed the contest.
>>> After that, he attended an audition, and he passed the contest.
Finally, he debuted as NCT’s member.
>>> correct
Likewise, I think the talent can learn and adapt grow older.
>>> Likewise, I think the talent can be learned and adapted as we grow older.
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