Do you think terrorism is here to stay? What do governments learn from terrorism?
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What a fantastic composition, Sir [이름]!
You are right, even if there is no terrorist attack has taken place in your area, that doesn’t mean you are safe.
We should be alert at all times.
Please always take good care of yourself.
See you.
Teacher Nina
The heart-wrenching terror attacks in Paris are not simply an assault against France, but against humanity.
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There is no more safe place in the world from terrors.
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Even if no major terrorist attack has taken place in your area, that doesn’t mean you are living in a safe zone.
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Today’s terrorist forces are armed with smart gadgets.
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They built an international network using the Internet and smartphones.
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By using them, they can collect intelligence and create an operation plan.
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It is the era of digital terrorism.
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Moreover, the new form of terrorism takes aim at so-called soft targets, ordinary places patronized by the masses.
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Since the September 11 attacks, terrorists are increasingly targeting ordinary citizens, so that prevention of 21st century terrorist attacks has become more difficult than ever.
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We need a whole range of attitudes to prevent terrorism.
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We must actively participate in international responses.
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Terrorism must be prevented at all cost.
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Post-management measures are only incidental.
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