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2017-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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Ability to do something depends on ability itself not a sex. Let`s imagine 170 cm tall and 70 kg people, and 140 cm tall and 30 kg people. Who do you think more suitable for dangerous duty? I think former is more suitable. I don`t care 170 cm tall and 70 kg people`s sex. A sex doesn`t matter.All that matter is ability itself.

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Good afternoon Lion! How are you?

I am deeply appreciative that you don\'t think gender has something to do with what a person is capable of. While it is true that there are things that men can do which women cannot, the fact also remains that there are things that women can do which men cannot. In this modern times, women are striving hard to do what men can do and vice versa. These efforts, in my opinion, are necessary to establish a middle ground for both gender. That no gender is weaker or superior than the other, not just in the military, but in all aspect of life.


See you!

Amanda ^-^


Ability to do something depends on ability itself not a sex.

>> The ability to do something depends on what you\'re capable of, and not on whether you\'re a male or a female.


Let`s imagine 170 cm tall and 70 kg people, and 140 cm tall and 30 kg people. Who do you think more suitable for dangerous duty?

>> Let\'s imagine someone who stands 170 cm tall and weigh 70 kg, then compare it to someone who is 140 cm tall and weigh 30 kg. Who do you think is more suitable to handle dangerous duties?


I think former is more suitable. I don`t care 170 cm tall and 70 kg people`s sex.

>> I think the former is more suitable, his or her gender shouldn\'t  be part of the equation.


A sex doesn`t matter. All that matter is ability itself.

>> Again, gender doesn\'t matter, all that counts is a persons capability.

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