Do you think that a staycation is actually a getaway?
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Our life style has modified in many ways due to COVID19. Most governments and medical experts over the world continuously have been advising to stay at home or do inevitable-social activities with minimum contacts with one another. Online class, subscribing Netflix, wearing a mask, and no touching each other such as no handshaking or hugging aren\'t any more strange things around our life, the middle of pandemic.
However, the longer we keep the social distancing rule, the more side effects we have. An accumulating stress is one of the side effects. It causes many complaints and high dissatisfaction as to our current life. To release their stress, people still have their vacation in different ways.
Staycation, which means having vacation at home or in a short distance, is one of ways instead of hanging out with our families or friends, travelling abroad or domestic areas. In my opinion, we should\'ve that kind of a relaxing time apart from our strange, but necessary to reduce our stress.
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Our life style has modified in many ways due to COVID19.
>> COVID-19 has changed our lives in different ways. Lifestyle changes are required to cope with the pandemic.
Most governments and medical experts over the world continuously have been advising to stay at home or do inevitable-social activities with minimum contacts with one another.
>> Most governments and medical experts across the globe have been advising incessantly to stay at home or go out only for essentials with minimum contact with one another.
Online class, subscribing Netflix, wearing a mask, and no touching each other such as no handshaking or hugging aren\'t any more strange things around our life, the middle of pandemic.
>> Having online classes, subscribing to Netflix, wearing masks, and avoiding physical contacts, such as handshaking or hugging are becoming the new norm. The COVID-19 pandemic has changed life as we know it.
However, the longer we keep the social distancing rule, the more side effects we have.
>> or: As the pandemic drags on, the side effects of social distancing takes an increasing toll on people.
An accumulating stress is one of the side effects.
>> The accumulation of stress is just one of these harmful effects.
It causes many complaints and high dissatisfaction as to our current life.
>> This causes complaints and high levels of dissatisfaction with our current life.
To release their stress, people still have their vacation in different ways.
>> To reduce mental strain and anxiety, people still have their vacations in varied ways.
Staycation, which means having vacation at home or in a short distance, is one of ways instead of hanging out with our families or friends, travelling abroad or domestic areas.
>> Staycation, which means having a vacation at home or within a short distance of one\'s home, is one of the ways to de-stress, which is much safer compared with hanging out with families or friends, travelling abroad or in domestic areas.
In my opinion, we should\'ve that kind of a relaxing time apart from our strange, but necessary to reduce our stress.
>> If you ask me, we should have that kind of downtime that would take us away from our strange, new life in the uncertain age of coronavirus. A staycation may be viewed as strange but is necessary for de-stressing.
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