Do you think that any of the age limits need changing?

2020-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I think that PG-15 movies should be regulated more strictly. It\'s because there are many violent and sensational scenes than we thought for children to watch. So, I think if they watch it alone without their parents, they have to be certified whether they are over 15 or not.

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I think that PG-15 movies should be regulated more strictly.
>> CORRECT!

It\'s because there are many violent and sensational scenes than we thought for children to watch.
>> CORRECT!

So, I think if they watch it alone without their parents, they have to be certified whether they are over 15 or not.
>> CORRECT!

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