DO YOU THINK THAT BIG BRANDS HAVE THEIR WEAKNESSES?
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I think Big brands have their weaknesses. First, The product price is soaring annually because they invest a lot of budget in develop the latest technology. It lead to go up in price. Eventhough they achieved thieir goal like developing new technology, they would have a possiblities to leak secret technique to the other countries. They don`t want to lag behind competiton with other firms.
Second, they offer garantee a year normally. when i have trouble using it 1 year later and fail to find technique fault, I have to paid a lot of money to fix it.
And they are focusing on the more lighter,thinner,wider product, because of it it`s fragile.
There are some weaknesses, but I always want use it.
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Hello there JM!
Wonderful to see you here on this part of our page. Upon using a branded product and recognizing its weaknesses, it can make us think how well did the company think of this certain feature or part. I think this is one reason why they always place a number to contact in case you have suggestions to make this product better.
Anyway, thanks for drafting this short and substantial composition! I am glad to read about your two cents about my question.
See you in class tonight then. =)
>> Correct!
Or>> I think big brands have their weaknesses.
First, The product price is soaring annually because they invest a lot of budget in develop the latest technology.
>> First, the product \'s price is soaring annually because they invest a lot of budget in developing the latest technology.
It lead to go up in price.
>> It leads the prices to rise up.
Eventhough they achieved thieir goal like developing new technology, they would have a possiblities to leak secret technique to the other countries.
>> Even though they achieved their goal to developing a new technology, they would have possibilities of leaking their secret techniques to the other countries.
They don`t want to lag behind competiton with other firms.
>> Correct!
>> competition (spelling)
Second, they offer garantee a year normally.
>> Second, they normally offer an annual guarantee.
when i have trouble using it 1 year later and fail to find technique fault, I have to paid a lot of money to fix it.
>> When I have trouble using it 1 year later and fail to find the technique fault, I have to pay a lot of money to fix it.
And they are focusing on the more lighter,thinner,wider product, because of it it`s fragile.
>> They are focusing on the lighter, thinner, and wider product because of it`s fragility.
There are some weaknesses, but I always want use it.
>> Correct!
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