Do you think that children are different today from the time when you were child? How?
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Good Thursday to you Sir [이름]!
Thank you very much for doing your homework.
Actually, I do agree with you.
My parents always say that the generation these days are really different.
They always scold us that we should work hard to get what we want.
Anyway, you did a fantastic job again. Keep up the good work.
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Teacher Nina
It has been a never ending issue since the human history began that today’s children are different from the time when we were child in various ways.
>> It has been a never ending issue since the human history began that today’s children are different from the time when we were a child in various ways.
>> OR: It has been a never ending issue since the human history began that today’s children are different from the time when we were a child in a lot of ways.
Adults often say that they are weak, selfish, rude, and impatient because they have been brought up in so called a “green house.”
>> Adults often say that they are weak, selfish, rude, and impatient because they have been brought up in a so called “green house.”
They have not gone through any difficult times, nor faced any big challenges.
>> Correct
The circumstances in which they grew up was affluent and much better than in the past in terms of financial and emotional conditions.
>> Correct
There was not anything that lacked for them.
>> Correct
>> OR: They didn\'t lack anything.
They could get easily what they want without making their own efforts.
>> Correct
They are physically bigger than those children in the past, but are they mentally stronger?
>> Correct
The answer is not positive, according to adults.
>> Correct
>> OR: The answer is no, according to adults.
However, the same story has been raised all the time even in the past.
>> Correct
Actually they are smarter and pursue a freewheeling lifestyle, but passionate about what they like.
>> Correct
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