Do you think that children these days have a better or worse childhood than your generation? Why?
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I think that they have a worse childhood than my generation.
Because when I was in kindergarten, many people didn\'t use smartphones.
But these days, most people have their own smartphones.
Children may enjoy playing on their smartphones more than playing outside, which can lead to smartphone addiction.
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Hello [이름]! :)
Because when I was in kindergarten, many people didn\'t use smartphones.
But these days, most people have their own smartphones.
Children may enjoy playing on their smartphones more than playing outside, which can lead to smartphone addiction.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I think that they have a worse childhood than my generation.
>> I think that they have a worse childhood generation than mine.
Because when I was in kindergarten, many people didn\'t use smartphones.
>> Because when I was in kindergarten, many people don\'t use smartphones yet.
But these days, most people have their own smartphones.
>> CORRECT!
Children may enjoy playing on their smartphones more than playing outside, which can lead to smartphone addiction.
>> Children these days enjoy playing on their smartphones more than playing outside, which can lead to smartphone addiction.
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