Do you think that different cultures think about beauty differently?

2018-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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I am sure that different cultures think about beauty differently. European men like women having a big(?) hip as my experience. Of course, they don't feel attractive about thin ladies. But Asian love women having a thin body. In case of make up, I think Japanese love to put eye makeup on. I sometimes feel uncomfortable when I meet Japanese on the street, because I haven't seen that kind of ladies in Korea. I have seen a lot of Arabize when I was living in UAE. They love to make their nail up. I guess it's because of their traditional clothes that is called Abaya which could hide people's body except hand and foot. People around world have a different thinking about everything, we must respect one's culture and admit things are different.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday Sir [이름]!

Thanks for dropping by the board Sir! You were able to convey your message very well. Yes, we all have our own kind of beauty. What matters the most is how we appreciate things as they are. In this world full of artificial beauty lies a very unique way to spot the beauty that shines from within. Let\'s all be appreciative to whatever we have because truly, it\'s a blessing from above. Hats off to you again!

~T. Eunice


I am sure that different cultures think about beauty differently.

>>Correct!

European men like women having a big(?) hip as my experience.

>> In my experience, European men like women having a big hip.
 Of course, they don\'t feel attractive about thin ladies. But Asian love women having a thin body.

>> Of course, they don\'t feel attracted about thin ladies but Asians love women having a thin body.
In case of make up, I think Japanese love to put eye makeup on.

>>Correct!

>> OR: I think Japanese love putting eye make up on to further emphasize their eyes.
 I sometimes feel uncomfortable when I meet Japanese on the street, because I haven\'t seen that kind of ladies in Korea.

>> Correct!
I have seen a lot of Arabize when I was living in UAE.

>> I have seen a lot of Arabs when I was living in the UAE.

They love to make their nail up.

>> They love having a well-polished nails.

I guess it\'s because of their traditional clothes that is called Abaya which could hide people\'s body except hand and foot.

>> I guess it\'s because of their traditional clothes called Abaya which could hide people\'s body except hands and feet.
 People around world have a different thinking about everything, we must respect one\'s culture and admit things are different.

>> People around the world have a different way of thinking about everything, we must respect one\'s culture and admit that things are different.


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