Do you think that endangered species should be kept in captive breeding programs or released into th
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I think that endangered species should be kept in captive breeding programs.
This is because they are likely to die of food lack or environmental problems.
People can feed proper food and provide the best environment to animals.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Plants and animals maintain the health of an ecosystem. And, when species become endangered, it’s a sign that an ecosystem is out of balance. This is why we should keep our environment healthy for no species to be extinct.
I think that endangered species should be kept in captive breeding programs.
>> CORRECT
This is because they are likely to die of food lack or environmental problems.
>> This is because they are likely of lack of food or environmental problems.
People can feed proper food and provide the best environment to animals.
>> CORRECT
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