Do you think that endangered species should be kept in captive breeding programs or released into th
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I think endangered species need human help. But I think we should train these animals’ instincts and release them into nature. because if animal make together with human, ecah animals’ instincts lose. so I think it is endangered species in other mean.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Plants and animals maintain the health of an ecosystem. And, when species become endangered, it’s a sign that an ecosystem is out of balance. This is why we should keep our environment healthy for no species to be extinct.
I think endangered species need human help.
>> CORRECT
But I think we should train these animals’ instincts and release them into nature.
>> Although I think that we should train their animal instincts and release them into nature.
because if animal make together with human, ecah animals’ instincts lose.
>> Because it animals stay together with humans, they might loose their animal instincts.
so I think it is endangered species in other mean.
>> I think endangered species should be released in the wild.
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