Do you think that food defines a culture? If so, how?
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Every country has different food and this food includes different culture.
>> CORRECT
OR>> Every country has their own unique cuisine and these showcase each country\'s culture.
Food doesn\'t make only one dimention, it has varieties recepies.
>> Food isn\'t only made up of one dimension, it has a variety of recipes.
Culture includes food , landgage, and customs.
>> Culture includes food, language, and customs.
Food is one of them.
>> CORRECT
Therefore, the food defindes a culture.
>> Therefore, the food of a certain place defines its culture.
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