Do you think that food defines a culture? If so, how?

2020-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

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Whenever I make out an itinerary, I always search the traditional restaurant because I would like to know what they eat. It is the way to understand the country that I visit. There are a lot of things to define culture all around world such as food, construction type and clothes. In regard to Korean food, we always have a lot of side dishes and many people love having soup every their meal. I didn\'t think that hamburger is a meal because it doesn\'t contain rice in it. Koreans also like spicy food, so we use chilly powder a lot. Gochujang is one of the main ingredient for food in Korea. In 1960s, we had Interkorea War and our country was colonized by Japan before Korea War. As a result, our ancestors was suffering to have meal so they put beef bones and tail into the water and made it soup. Because it was the best way to make a lot of soup. It is still popular soup for Koreans but I don\'t think foreigners can understand why Koreans eat soup was made by bones.

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Happy Wednesday, Mr. [이름]! Great composition! I\'ve learned a bit of your history and food culture. Tell me more about it in class. See you! ^_^

~T.Avery

Whenever I make out an itinerary, I always search the traditional restaurant because I would like to know what they eat.

>> CORRECT

It is the way to understand the country that I visit.

>> CORRECT

There are a lot of things to define culture all around world such as food, construction type and clothes.

>> There are a lot of things to define culture all around the world such as food, construction type, and clothes.

OR>> Various factors characterize the culture of a certain country.
In regard to Korean food, we always have a lot of side dishes and many people love having soup every their meal.

>>With regards to Korean food, we always have a lot of side dishes and many people love having soup in each of their meal.

I didn\'t think that hamburger is a meal because it doesn\'t contain rice in it.

>> CORRECT

Koreans also like spicy food, so we use chilly powder a lot.

>> CORRECT

Gochujang is one of the main ingredient for food in Korea.

>> Gochujang is one of the main ingredients for food in Korea.

In 1960s, we had Interkorea War and our country was colonized by Japan before Korea War.

>> In the 1960s, we had an  Inter-Korean war and our country was colonized by Japan before that war.

As a result, our ancestors was suffering to have meal so they put beef bones and tail into the water and made it soup. Because it was the best way to make a lot of soup.

>> As a result, our ancestors were suffering from lack of food so they put beef bones and tail into the water and made it into soup because it was the best way to make a lot of it.

It is still popular soup for Koreans but I don\'t think foreigners can understand why Koreans eat soup was made by bones.

>> It is still a popular soup for Koreans but I don\'t think foreigners can understand why Koreans eat soup made from bones. 

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