Do you think that getting a college education should be free? Why? Why not?

2019-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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In Korea, it is compulsory education until middle school, so first, it should be changed to compulsory education in high school. And I think it's right for anyone who wants to study to go there for free. Because, I think, that's the only way to be equal. If money prevents you from going to college or getting rich, that society is an unequal society, and poor people cannot have the jobs they want. Therefore, for equality, to give everyone a chance, I think universities should be free to attend.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]^^

Thank you for this answer Mr. [이름]! Let\'s hope our government will do its best to support our education!

QUESTION: Do you think that getting a college education should be free? Why? Why not?

In Korea, it is compulsory education until middle school, so first, it should be changed to compulsory education in high school.

>>Education in Korea is compulsory until middle school, so first, it should be extended to high school.
And I think it\'s right for anyone who wants to study to go there for free.

>>And I think anyone who wants to study should go there for free.
Because, I think, that\'s the only way to be equal.
>>CORRECT!
If money prevents you from going to college or getting rich, that society is an unequal society, and poor people cannot have the jobs they want.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, for equality, to give everyone a chance, I think universities should be free to attend.

>>Therefore, for equality, to give everyone a chance, I think universities should be free to attend.

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