Do you think that governments should encourage public transport more? Why or why not?
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I think that governments should make public transport more.
>>I think that the government should make more public transport.
Now, they are almost inconvenient In another cities excepting Seoul and metropolitan cities.
>>Due to the lack of public transportation, it is inconvenient for other cities except Seoul and the metropolis.
Easily available subway is only in the Seoul and metropolitan cities.
>>The subway is easily available only in Seoul and the metropolis.
In another cities, the subway stations have long gap each other or don\'t exist.
>>In other cities, the subway stations have a long gap with each other or they don\'t exist at all.
Fortunately, they usually have city bus.
>>Fortunately, they still have city buses to ride on.
However, the city bus interval is almost long, and the stations are short of number, so people have lack to move.
>>However, the city bus\' interval is long and the stations are short of number. So people struggle to move.
When I\'m in another cities, moving through public transport is very inconvenient.
>>When I\'m in another city, moving to another place to get a public transport is very inconvenient.
I usually use a taxi, or my friend\'s car.
>>I ususally use a taxi or my friend\'s car.
Therefore, I think making more public transport is need by government.
>>Therefore, I think making public transport accessible to all must be given by the government.
There are many people who can\'t drive for any reasons. It is me too.
>>I think there are many people who can\'t drive for many reasons.
I have driver licence, but I can\'t drive, because achieving that is been a longtime.
>>I have a driver\'s license, but I can\'t drive becasue it takes a long time to get it.
I wish to have the world that don\'t need private car, and people can travel anywhere.
>>I wish to live in a world where we didn\'t need any private cars and we could travel anywhere.
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