Do you think that governments should encourage public transport more?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course I think that we need more public transport.
These days, we have so many cars, so we are suffered heavy traffic jam.
If we have more public transport than now, so we don\'t need own car, so traffic jam will be resolved.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]. I agree with you that we need more public transport to avoid traffic jams. Keep up the good work and see you tomorrow! ^^
-T. Julia
Of course I think that we need more public transport.
>> Correct
These days, we have so many cars, so we are suffered heavy traffic jam.
>> These days, we have so many cars, so we suffer from heavy traffic jams.
If we have more public transport than now, so we don\'t need own car, so traffic jam will be resolved.
>> If we have more public transport than we do now, we wouldn\'t need to own a car, and as a result, traffic jams would be resolved.
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