Do you think that governments should encourage public transport more?
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I guess ,we have to use public trasnport more than car commute time.
Especially the traffic is really bad during rush hour so the government should give benefits to commters.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Grace^^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
_T. SHAY^^
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I guess ,we have to use public trasnport more than car commute time.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
_T. SHAY^^
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I guess ,we have to use public trasnport more than car commute time.
>>I guess we have to use the public transport more than our own cars.
Especially the traffic is really bad during rush hour so the government should give benefits to commters.
Especially the traffic is really bad during rush hour so the government should give benefits to commters.
>>Also, the traffic is really bad during rush hours, so the government should give benefits to the commuters.
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