Do you think that having money and fame means that you are a successful person?
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Those people are successful in society, but the most important thing is self-confidence. Eventhough many people define about success, I think success depends on person\'s view.
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Hi, Ms. [이름]! Thanks for sending in your composition. I like your idea about self-confidence. Let\'s talk about it more in class. See you! ^^
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Those people are successful in society, but the most important thing is self-confidence.
>> CORRECT
Eventhough many people define about success, I think success depends on person\'s view.
>> Even though many people define success in different ways, I think success depends on each person\'s point of view.
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