Do you think that it is a good or bad habit for young people to play computer games? Why?
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Ohhhhhhh, it\'s an interesting question for me. I guess good habits which I don\'t have. On the other hand, I have a lot of bad habits such as bending over, rai[이름]g [이름]gle leg, and crisscross applesauce. I believe it can make my waist bad. I know it\'s putting pressure on my body, but the posture is so comfortable.
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Hi, Eric.
Thank you for sharing your ideas. You\'re doing great! Keep up the good work!
[이름]cerely,
^^ T. Ara
Ohhhhhhh, it\'s an interesting question for me.
>> Ohhhhhhh, this is a very interesting question.
I guess good habits which I don\'t have.
>> I guess playing computer is a good habit. But I don\'t play computer games.
On the other hand, I have a lot of bad habits such as bending over, rai[이름]g [이름]gle leg, and crisscross applesauce.
>> I have good habits but I also have bad habits such as bending over, rai[이름]g a [이름]gle leg, and crisscros[이름]g applesauce.
I believe it can make my waist bad.
>> I believe it can make a bad posture.
I know it\'s putting pressure on my body, but the posture is so comfortable.
>> I know it\'s putting a lot of bad pressure on my body, but I don\'t mind because it makes me super comfortable.
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