Do you think that it is necessary to recycle things?

2020-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Ysabelle

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Hi, Ysabelle. I absolutely agree that it is necessary. This is not only for economical reasons but also for environmental reasons. Human being is facing big environmental problems such as an weird climate change. Unless we try to make nature get healthier, we are going to perish. With best wishes,

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Hi, Ysabelle.

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I absolutely agree that it is necessary.

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This is not only for economical reasons but also for environmental reasons.

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Human being is facing big environmental problems such as an weird climate change.

>>Human beings are facing big environmental problems such as climate change.

Unless we try to make nature get healthier, we are going to perish.

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With best wishes.

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