Do you think that making a scene in public is a mature way of dealing with your complaints? Why or w
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It\'s not a mature way.
Because first of all, public places are not for just one person. It\'s for everybody.
Complaining about something can make people annoyed and maybe even damage people.
So you can just text, call or write a letter to the person who you would like to complain or talk about it.
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Do you think that making a scene in public is a mature way of dealing with your complaints? Why or why not?
It\'s not a mature way.
Because first of all, public places are not for just one person.
Because first of all, public places are not for just one person.
>>> It\'s not a mature way because first of all, public places are not for just one person.
It\'s for everybody.
>>> CORRECT
Complaining about something can make people annoyed and maybe even damage people.
>>> Complaining about something can annoy other people and even damage people.
So you can just text, call or write a letter to the person who you would like to complain or talk about it.
>>> CORRECT
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