Do you think that many politicians are honest? Why or why not?
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I think almost politicians are not honest. But some politicians are really honest.
So we have to vote for honest peoples and search what they did.
But young peoples don\'t study and search what they did. They always vote for famous politicians. I think that\'s not good for country.
They know that young peoples not interested in policy, So They always release a new policy that for only order peoples.
But these days, A lot of people interested in policy and government. Because of former president Yoon.
He did really bad things a lot during his president. Almost peoples hope that Yoon have to live in the jail in his life.
There are no good things during his president, But proving our power to the world was only good thing. Koreans were still alive.
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Hi, Joon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
I think almost politicians are not honest.
>> I think almost all politicians are not honest.
But some politicians are really honest.
>> CORRECT!
So we have to vote for honest peoples and search what they did.
>> So we have to vote for honest people and search yor what they have done for the country.
But young peoples don\'t study and search what they did.
>> But young people don\'t study and search foŕ what their platforms.
They always vote for famous politicians.
>> CORRECT!
I think that\'s not good for country.
>> I think that\'s not good for the country.
They know that young peoples not interested in policy, So They always release a new policy that for only order peoples.
>> They know that young people are not interested in politics, so they always release a new policy only to order people.
But these days, A lot of people interested in policy and government.
>> But these days, a lot of people are interested in politics and the government.
Because of former president Yoon.
>> It\'s all because of former president Yoon.
He did really bad things a lot during his president.
>> He did really bad things during his presidency.
Almost peoples hope that Yoon have to live in the jail in his life.
>> Most people hope that Yoon have to live in life in jail.
There are no good things during his president, But proving our power to the world was only good thing.
>> There are no good things during his presidencu, but proving our power to the world was the only good thing.
Koreans were still alive.
>> CORRECT!
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