Do you think that minorities should be given job priority because of their race? Why/why not?
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I don’t agree with minorities should be give job priority because of their race.
Because, I think this opinion is not applicable in these days.
When the racism was strong, the job priority needed to overcome the gap.
However, today the most of country try to eliminate the racism.
So if we continue to give job priority for minorities, it will be a reverse discrimination for majorities.
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Have a wonderful night. :)
~ T. Tricia
I don’t agree with minorities should be give job priority because of their race.
>> I don’t agree that minorities should be given as job priority because of their race.
Because, I think this opinion is not applicable in these days.
>> Because I think this opinion is not applicable in these days.
When the racism was strong, the job priority needed to overcome the gap.
>> When racism was strong, the job priority needed to overcome the gap.
However, today the most of country try to eliminate the racism.
>> However, today most countries try to eliminate racism.
So if we continue to give job priority for minorities, it will be a reverse discrimination for majorities.
>> So if we continue to give job priority for minorities, it will be reverse discrimination for majorities.
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