Do you think that money and fame mean success?

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Here are my corrections for you:

Earning a lot of money or fame is not mean success.

>> Earning a lot of money or fame does not mean success.
But that is result of success.

>> But that is a result of success.
Have a lot of money and fame dosen\'t mean 100% success.

>> Having a lot of money and fame doesn\'t mean 100% success.
But the man who success of the life has a lot of money and fame.

>> But the man who has success in life has a lot of money and fame.