Do you think that most people are naturally able to get along with others or is it a skill which nee

2018-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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In my opinion, people can naturally get along with others. Some people enjoy making a close relationship with lots of people, but others like making a few friends. It is just different how various relationships ones have though, people instinctively socialize with others. There are some reasons why people can do that. First of all, people cannot live alone. People need others' helps everyday, because our society is really complicated. For example, people are not self-sufficient though, people buy daily goods in markets. Sick people see a doctor, and students learn lots of things from teachers. People can give and take lots of things. In addition, people want to enjoy their lives. Getting along with others will be a good way to live happily. If people live alone, they would be lonely. It will be too stressful, so people need to socialize with others to have fun. For these reasons, I agree with the statement that people can naturally get along with others.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!(\",)
As John Donne said, \" No man is an island\". People are social beings. We can\'t live without other people. Thanks for sending in your opinion regarding the topic. Enjoy your weekend!(\",)
~T. Lynn
In my opinion, people can naturally get along with others.
>> correct!
Some people enjoy making a close relationship with lots of people, but others like making a few friends.
>> correct!
It is just different how various relationships ones have though, people instinctively socialize with others.
>> It is just different how various relationships are formed though, people instinctively socialize with others.
There are some reasons why people can do that.
>> correct!
First of all, people cannot live alone.
>> correct!
People need others\' help everyday, because our society is really complicated.
>> correct!
For example, people are not self-sufficient though, people buy daily goods in markets.
>> correct!
Sick people see a doctor, and students learn lots of things from teachers. People can give and take lots of things.
>> correct!
In addition, people want to enjoy their lives. Getting along with others will be a good way to live happily.
>> correct!
If people live alone, they would be lonely. It will be too stressful, so people need to socialize with others to have fun.
>> correct!
For these reasons, I agree with the statement that people can naturally get along with others.
>> correct!

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