Do you think that most people are naturally able to get along with others or is it a skill that need

2020-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I think it is different depending on a person\'s personality. Some people enjoy meeting new friends and the time gets along with others. But some others feel a difficulty to get along with others and sometimes think that is stressful. For me, I am the later one. As I\'ve been working at the company for some years, I could be less shy when I meet people but still feel exhausted after that. So I need to charge my inner energy by staying along at home.

강사 첨삭

Hey, [이름]. Thank you for sharing your experience in dealing with people. I can relate to what you are going through. I try to recharge on the weekends and going to church also helps with that. Anyway, it gets better. ^^ Let\'s talk again on Friday. Have a good one today. ~ teacher Jane c\",) 


I think it is different depending on a person\'s personality.
>>> CORRECT =) 

Some people enjoy meeting new friends and the time gets along with others.
>>> Some people enjoy meeting new friends and it is easy for them to get along with others. 

But some others feel a difficulty to get along with others and sometimes think that is stressful.
>>> But some people have difficulty getting along with others and they sometimes think that is stressful.

For me, I am the later one. 
>>> For me, I am the latter one. 

As I\'ve been working at the company for some years, I could be less shy when I meet people but still feel exhausted after that.
>>> CORRECT =) 

So I need to charge my inner energy by staying along at home.
>>> So I need to recharge my inner energy by staying alone at home.

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