Do you think that older people are always right? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I don\'t because I think everyone can\'t be always incorrect and perfect. Sometimes, older people can say wrong things and younger people can say right things. So, I think before we agree about something, we should think about it more deeply. If we conduct this process, clearly, we will be able to think about anything more deeply and learn how to think. After this process, if we oppose about it, we should tell our opinions politely because they are older than us.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kimberly:)
That\'s true. Every person makes mistakes. Humans are not perfect regardless is you are older or younger so we have to respect each other equally.
No, I don\'t because I think everyone can\'t be always incorrect and perfect.
>> No, I don\'t because I think everyone can\'t always be correct and perfect.
Sometimes, older people can say wrong things and younger people can say right things.
>> CORRECT
So, I think before we agree about something, we should think about it more deeply.
>> So I think before we agree about something, we should think about it more deeply.
If we conduct this process, clearly, we will be able to think about anything more deeply and learn how to think.
>If we conduct this process, clearly, we will be able to understand it more.
After this process, if we oppose about it, we should tell our opinions politely because they are older than us.
>> After this process, if we oppose about it, we should still tell our opinions politely because they are older than us.
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