Do you think that older people are always right? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think that older people are always right.
Because in this world, there are many criminals who are older than me.
They are all older people but they did the crime.
And the crime is not a good thing or a right thing in this world.
So they are all punished and they have to reflect on their selves through their rest of the lives.
So I don\'t think that older people are always right.
They are all people too, so they can make different kinds of mistakes.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
That\'s true. Every person makes mistakes. Humans are not perfect regardless is you are older or younger so we have to respect each other equally.
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I don\'t think that older people are always right.
>> CORRECT
Because in this world, there are many criminals who are older than me.
>> CORRECT
They are all older people but they did the crime.
>> They are all older people but they still commit crimes.
And the crime is not a good thing or a right thing in this world.
>> And committing crime is not a good thing.
So they are all punished and they have to reflect on their selves through their rest of the lives.
>> So, they are all punished and they have to reflect on their actions by themselves for the rest of their lives.
So I don\'t think that older people are always right.
>> CORRECT
They are all people too, so they can make different kinds of mistakes.
>> They are still people so they can make mistakes as well regardless of the age.
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