Do you think that older people are always right? Why or why not?
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I don\'t want to answer homework question. So, I chose this question. :) When I was younger, I thought the older people were always right and said words. However, as getting older, I realized that most they were stubborn like Karen. Especially, most Asian countries have a Confucian as Buddhist. So, young people can\'t against them. Of course, I can\'t ignore their experience that they\'ve been through. Also, I can\'t count how much it is because an experience could show another solution sometimes. There is saying in my country as you are getting older, you would be quieter and you would open your wallet more often.
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I don\'t want to answer the homework question.
>> That\'s okay ~ no problem! ^^ - Camille
So, I chose this question. :)
>> CORRECT!When I was younger, I thought the older people were always right and said words.
>> When I was younger, I thought the older people were always right and all the words they say are right.
However, as getting older, I realized that most they were stubborn like Karen.
>> However, as getting older, I realized that most were stubborn like Karen. (I AGREE!)
Especially, most Asian countries have a Confucian as Buddhist.
>> Especially, most Asian countries are Confucians or Buddhists.
So, young people can\'t against them.
>> So, young people can\'t be against them.
Of course, I can\'t ignore their experience that they\'ve been through.
>> CORRECT!Also, I can\'t count how much it is because an experience could show another solution sometimes.
>> CORRECT!There is a saying in my country as you are getting older, you would be quieter and you would open your wallet more often.
>> CORRECT!
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