Do you think that older people make better leaders? Explain your opinion.
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Hi [이름]! I think each generation has it\'s own brilliance. We should respect everyone.~TDee
i think that issue will vary from person to person
>>I think that issue will vary from person to person.
they have both weakness and advantage.
>>They have both weakness and strengths.
definitely older people experienced many things than younger people.
>>Definitely, older people experienced many things than younger people.
but many prejudice saying older people useful than younger is too stereotype.
>>But, many prejudice say that older people are more useful than the younger generation.
as we get older, we have more and more to lose.
>>As we get older, we have more and more to lose.
it\'s honor or money or whatever. to lose is to be afraid.
>>It could be honor or money or whatever. They are afraid to lose them.
So older people hesitate to make a decision.
>>CORRECT!
This is big weakness as leader.
>>CORRECT!
But sometimes this weakness become advantage when we have to deal with big project with our life.
>> But sometimes this weakness become an advantage when we have to deal with big project in our life.
Because big project requires prudence.
>> It is because a big project requires prudence.
And younger people have nothing to lose as opposed to old people.
>>CORRECT!
They tend to make quick and bold decisions.
>>CORRECT!
I think these are the biggest differences between the old and the young.
>>CORRECT!
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