Do you think that older people make better leaders? Explain your opinion.

2019-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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i think that issue will vary from person to person they have both weakness and advantage. definitely older people experienced many things than younger people. but many prejudice saying older people useful than younger is too stereotype. as we get older, we have more and more to lose. it\'s honor or money or whatever. to lose is to be afraid. So older people hesitate to make a decision. This is big weakness as leader. But sometimes this weakness become advantage when we have to deal with big project with our life. Because big project requires prudence. And younger people have nothing to lose as opposed to old people. They tend to make quick and bold decisions. I think these are the biggest differences between the old and the young.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I think each generation has it\'s own brilliance. We should respect everyone.~TDee


i think that issue will vary from person to person

>>I think that issue will vary from person to person.
 they have both weakness and advantage.

>>They have both weakness and strengths.
definitely older people experienced many things than younger people.

>>Definitely, older people experienced many things than younger people.

but many prejudice saying older people useful than younger is too stereotype.

>>But, many prejudice say that older people are more useful than the younger generation.

 as we get older, we have more and more to lose.

>>As we get older, we have more and more to lose.
 it\'s honor or money or whatever. to lose is to be afraid.

 >>It could be honor or money or whatever. They are afraid to lose them.
So older people hesitate to make a decision.

>>CORRECT!
This is big weakness as leader.

>>CORRECT!
 But sometimes this weakness become advantage when we have to deal with big project with our life.

>> But sometimes this weakness become an advantage when we have to deal with big project in our life.
 Because big project requires prudence.

>> It is because a big project requires prudence.
 And younger people have nothing to lose as opposed to old people.

>>CORRECT!
 They tend to make quick and bold decisions.

>>CORRECT!
 I think these are the biggest differences between the old and the young.

>>CORRECT!

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