Do you think that pirated products are just as good?
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I`m not satisfied with pirated products following these reasons.
>>I`m not satisfied with pirated products with these following reasons.
first, someone who use illegal products consider that To use it is more reasonable than using genuine.
>>First, someone who uses illegal products consider it to be more reasonable than using genuine products.
But they need to consider that pirated product`s provider obtains illegal benefit from the user.
>>correct
If this situation keep going, It disturb genuine companie`s invest in various indusrial.
>>If this situation will keep on going, it will disturb the genuine company\'s investments in various industry.
second, They are including some of error in the products.
>>Second, they are putting some errors in the products.
forexample, It is easy to download movie films by the internet. but provider put the virus in the files.
>> For example, it is easy to download movie films by the internet, but the provider will put virus in the files.
It leads to spead virus other computer. by the virus, they steel some of information.
>>It leads to the spread of virus to other computers thus they steal some information.
by these reasons I disagee with using pirated products.
>>By these reasons, I disagee with using pirated products.
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