Do you think that some people are destined to meet?

2016-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Although I’m a person who doesn’t believe in superstition and relies on scientific proofs, I sometimes wonder whether there is invisible force that controls our life. I’m not a firm believer in destiny, but I also admit that there are many incidents that are occurring beyond our control. It is true that many things are happening every day that can’t be simply explained by the name of science. Mankind has been existing for thousands of years and continuously evolving. Humans have invented tons of great things and advanced technologies even to travel to other planets and comets. However, we still don’t know where and how life has been created. We are not sure yet whether there are an extraterrestrial being or how big the universe is. So, it is imprudent for us to simply deny destiny. It could be true that some people are destined to meet. Although our life hasn’t been completely set so that it can change as how we design, there could be something that is already decided.

강사 첨삭

Great job Sir [이름]!

Happy Wednesday!

Thanks for your composition. ^^

I hope that you will have a great day.

See you!

Teacher Nina


Although I’m a person who doesn’t believe in superstition and relies on scientific proofs, I sometimes wonder whether there is invisible force that controls our life.

>> correct

I’m not a firm believer in destiny, but I also admit that there are many incidents that are occurring beyond our control.

>> correct

It is true that many things are happening every day that can’t be simply explained by the name of science.

>> correct

Mankind has been existing for thousands of years and continuously evolving.

>> correct

Humans have invented tons of great things and advanced technologies even to travel to other planets and comets.

>> correct

However, we still don’t know where and how life has been created.

>> correct

We are not sure yet whether there are an extraterrestrial being or how big the universe is.

>> correct

So, it is imprudent for us to simply deny destiny.

>> correct

It could be true that some people are destined to meet.

>> correct

Although our life hasn’t been completely set so that it can change as how we design, there could be something that is already decided.

>> correct

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