Do you think that some people are destined to meet?
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Although I’m a person who doesn’t believe in superstition and relies on scientific proofs, I sometimes wonder whether there is invisible force that controls our life.
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I’m not a firm believer in destiny, but I also admit that there are many incidents that are occurring beyond our control.
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It is true that many things are happening every day that can’t be simply explained by the name of science.
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Mankind has been existing for thousands of years and continuously evolving.
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Humans have invented tons of great things and advanced technologies even to travel to other planets and comets.
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However, we still don’t know where and how life has been created.
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We are not sure yet whether there are an extraterrestrial being or how big the universe is.
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So, it is imprudent for us to simply deny destiny.
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It could be true that some people are destined to meet.
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Although our life hasn’t been completely set so that it can change as how we design, there could be something that is already decided.
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